Apprentice Piece
I am from broken homes,
broken like thin piece of glass
dropped from the top of the
I am from quarrels, fights, and grudges.
I am from the smell cigarettes
that will never come out of me clothing.
From the smell of secrecy, and secrets.
Secrets that are whispered in every ear,
but mine.
I am from a "history of violence."
Violence that been in my life two long years,
I am from living off of food stamps, and child support,
then moving to a place parallel the heaven.
If you talked to a close relative,
they could easily tell you where I am from,
I am from hate, and despair
from a mother that would never care
1 comment:
Shelby,
Nice sensory detail in your lead! I like how you begin with an intense moment, which really pulls your readers into your memoir. I certainly wanted to know what happened to you after reading your first paragraph! You do a nice job making your memoir vivid for readers by using sensory imagery and characterization throughout your entire piece.
-Miss R.
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